The lofi creates a tense atmosphere that I enjoy but I think the song would be better with the white-noise-like effect (I don't know technical music terms) toned down just a smidge when addition instruments come in because it starts to make it hard to listen to the rest of the song. It hurts my ears a little, but on the other hand I enjoy the heavy, purposeful feel of the bass and the overall simplicity of the song. Maybe a highlight section somewhere where you change it up a bit? Unless of course, you made the song with the purpose of looping or consistency. In which case, ignore me.